Taylor's Story

 I'm writing a story heres a little insight on it. tell me what you think!

       Taylor never thought a something like a 4 wheeler would change her life!
     
   15 year old Taylor was a spark of life, a talented girl,but it was all changed. When she has a accident on a 4 wheeler that she was coaxed to ride to show off a stunt she learned to her younger brothers friend she never imagined it would change her life! To cover up her grief she uses her talent of singing,but later she has to let go of her grief and lean on God when new struggles rise.  She begins to use her siging talent and her accident to challenge and change others as well as herself!

What do you think?
Hers a slight description of her looks: Straight, silky, long, black hair, big descriptive green eyes, along with a nice medium build. Shes not hefty at all, of not a twig. She is actually pretty strong!